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最近學校在如火如荼的練習美語歌曲比賽！小班的主題是水；中班是顏色；大班是躲避球！
而我今天上線上家教課，發現我幫小班想的隊呼有問題！！！
"Water can drink,
Water can swim,
Water can take a shower,
Water can brush your teeth,
Water can wash your hands!
Don’t waste water!
Music please"
上面的隊呼犯了一個文法的錯誤，大家可以猜猜看！
最近學校在如火如荼的練習美語歌曲比賽！小班的主題是水；中班是顏色；大班是躲避球！
而我今天上線上家教課，發現我幫小班想的隊呼有問題！！！
"Water can drink,
Water can swim,
Water can take a shower,
Water can brush your teeth,
Water can wash your hands!
Don’t waste water!
Music please"
上面的隊呼犯了一個文法的錯誤，大家可以猜猜看！
答案就是：Water不能當主動句，要當被動句！因為水不會自己喝、游泳、刷牙......等。我犯了一個中文直翻美語的文法錯誤 
家教老師和我討論出兩個新隊呼：
A.
I can drink the water
I can swim in the water
I can take a shower using water
I can wash my hands with water
I can brush my teeth with water
Don't waste water
A.
I can drink the water
I can swim in the water
I can take a shower using water
I can wash my hands with water
I can brush my teeth with water
Don't waste water
B.
Water, water, water,water
Water is important
I can drink it
I can swim in it
I can take a shower in it
I can wash my hands in it
I can brush my teeth in it
So don't waste water
Water, water, water,water
Water is important
I can drink it
I can swim in it
I can take a shower in it
I can wash my hands in it
I can brush my teeth in it
So don't waste water
如果是大班，直接練新的很快，我就不猶豫直接改！但因為是小班，所以我就超級超級痛苦的QQ
開頭換A
開頭換B
不改，維持舊版
開頭換A
開頭換B
不改，維持舊版
然後我原本希望可以使用Grammaly之類的幫我確認文法，結果它居然說原本的句子文法正確@@
辛苦了，這問題我光想像就很痛苦……
我外人來看，感覺改正會比較好，怕會有家長聽到會介意，但我不清楚要再教小班新東西有多難。
A 跟 B，我比較喜歡 B，有詩歌的感覺。
我外人來看，感覺改正會比較好，怕會有家長聽到會介意，但我不清楚要再教小班新東西有多難。
A 跟 B，我比較喜歡 B，有詩歌的感覺。
如果改成：
What can you drink? Water!
Where can you swim? Water!
...等等，我覺得就沒有語意問題，唸起來也有節奏感
What can you drink? Water!
Where can you swim? Water!
...等等，我覺得就沒有語意問題，唸起來也有節奏感
改成被動態如何呢？
water can be drunk?
water can be drunk?
比較喜歡B+1
Water can be drunk,
Water can be swum,
Water can be taken as a shower,
Water can rinse your teeth,
Water can clean your hands!
Don’t waste water!
這樣跟原本夠像，小孩應該比較容易改吧？
Water can be swum,
Water can be taken as a shower,
Water can rinse your teeth,
Water can clean your hands!
Don’t waste water!
這樣跟原本夠像，小孩應該比較容易改吧？
ian21_melon: 我了解Ian的意思，但其實問句比答句難！不過我也會想一個問句版的，和老師討論看看
materialgl: 謝謝MG的建議，我明天納入方案和老師討論一下 
語言學術語的說法：
"water can drink" 沒有「文法錯誤」，但是「語意錯誤」。
參考：
Colorless green ideas sleep furiously - 維基百科，自由的百科全書
"water can drink" 沒有「文法錯誤」，但是「語意錯誤」。
參考：
Colorless green ideas sleep furiously - 維基百科，自由的百科全書
第一個也是想到被動，還有一個就是省略主詞(? 我不是很確定這樣算不算
Drink the water.
Swim in water.
Shower under water.
Brush teeth with water.
Wash hands using water.
Drink the water.
Swim in water.
Shower under water.
Brush teeth with water.
Wash hands using water.